Raziel Moore | Monocle

9/1/12 – Man of Air

In micropoem, microstory on 09/01/2012 at 9:00 am

There once was a man of air,
whose memory was the rain;
he remembered a girl,
but could never be certain about her tears.

Her scent within him,
he went in search.
On clear days, he relied on the whif of salt.
In the deluge he recalled her face.

Air and mud – sky and earth –
the longest search only to discover
they were always touching,
immiscible save in the storm.


  1. I love the lightness of this – airy but with depth đŸ™‚

  2. I love the concept and the description Raz. beautiful as always but with a depth that left me wanting.

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