Raziel Moore | Monocle

20/12/11 – The Illusion

In micropoem on 20/12/2011 at 9:00 am

She could not hold him
in her heart
but her cunt held him
with such sweetness.
They pretended
that was enough.


  1. Being a male I can’t emphasize with the female, but I can understand the feelings one might have in such a situation. You have packed a great deal of emotion into this piece. I assume a sympathy fuck is better than no fuck at all and as a replacement for love is there anything better for the male?

    • It’s not so much a sympathy fuck here. It’s the holding on to the shell of physical pleasure when the emotion inside is gone. It ‘works’, in this case, for both of them.

  2. I thoroughly understood this one. Sadly it was the case of my marriage.
    Beautifully portrayed as always Raz.

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